SPEAKING FROM EXPERIENCE - turning point

Taking onboard the feedback given to me during the crit, and the experiences that I encountered during printing, I decided to change the format of my booklets. I am undecided as to whether or not they will all work as a set with the A5 booklets, or individually.

Points of feedback I'm going to focus on:

- consider adding explanation of why you would need those specific products

- decide upon a different format, but keep it pocket sized (probably A6)

- work with coloured stock

An appropriate format to use would be a hotdog booklet. This way I could keep it pocket-sized, still include a cover, and I also wouldn't have the issue of printing double-sized, which has cause me so many issues. I am also going to consider different variations of coloured stock and how I can include all of the information in my previous booklets. I feel that the hotdog booklets should only contain the illustrations, and the other information should be presented elsewhere, perhaps on a belly band, or on separate inserts. This would allow for the possibility of a little package for my products.

Lining up a grid and adding the illustrations.

Hotdog booklets

£0-5

£5-10

£10+ 

After looking at these designs, I realised that the title page wasn't needed as I was going to be producing a cover. I will therefore replace these with some the list of unnecessary items individuals purchase. 

Prototypes