1. Design Solution
Strengths
Helpful and useful. Pocket-sized, will prepare students for future issues surrounding print costs etc.
Love the type and coloured stock.
Areas for improvement
Some areas have pixelated during printing. Finish it off.
Design Context
Strengths
Good appropriate style. Just need the boards. Effective use of different booklets.
Areas for improvement
Boards showing style would be nice.
Possible typefaces and colours etc.
Presentation
Strengths
Good explanation of product.
Areas for improvement
Try focus on chosen proposal rather than other possibilities.
Additional comments
Good work, love Ross and David.
2. Design Solution
Strengths
Booklets on what you should buy as a graphic designer.
Nice, friendly illustrations
Areas for improvement
Explain why these products should be bought
Design Context
Strengths
Conducted survey on what people waste their money on.
Helpful guide on what you need, essential products.
Areas for improvement
Would be good if the information could be sent to students prior to their arrival on the course.
Presentation
Strengths
Good choice of stock, illustrations look good on cartridge paper.
Nice colours for booklet cover.
Areas for improvement
Come up with what format you are going to use.
Additional comments
Small format looks better than big format
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